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A Love Poem

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Posted by: MASZOO

Here is a poem that I wrote...

A Love Poem

I look towards the stars and the heavens,
And what do I see?
I see just a little bit of His majesty and power.

I hold a young cat in my arms,
And what do a feel?
I feel little of what His love must be like.

I sit in a forest with no one to bother me,
And what do I hear?
I hear His voice whispering in my ear.

I see someone become well by calling out to Him,
And what do know?
I know that He has healed them by their faith.

I see a wooden cross on a hill,
And what do I remember?
I remember that He sent His Son to die for us.

I know of someone who recieved a second chance,
And what do I think?
I think of His gift of salvation and grace that He gave to us.

I hold a new baby in my arms,
And what do I remain?
I remain in His loving arms forever and ever.


So let me know what you all think about it. I would like to hear all kinds of feed back. I would especially like to hear if it touched you and in what way.

Thanks
Jessica M.



Posted by: EzBreeze62

YES!! First off, I'm so excited to see someone else post some of their work! Also, I'd really like to commend you. I enjoyed this very much! It spoke to me of the fact that God speaks to us in a still small voice sometimes, and we only have to listen. Also that He is in ebverything and is everywhere. He created this world so that everything we see should remind us of Him and his awesome power. Keep up the good work!



Posted by: MASZOO

Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. This last spring I entered it into a contest for young poets and it was published. That was kind of a surprise because it is clearly about God. Then I entered it at the county fair this year (I am in 4-H) and it got Grand Champion. The judge was so impressed and excited with it. That surprised me also, it has been the boldest step that I have taken with my writings about
God. (and to think that I have always hated English class and have always gotten my lowest grades there) When I have time I will share some of my other poems.

Jessica M.



Posted by: m-jhane

hi, nice poem! I like it! Continue to write more poems for God's glory!
m-jhane



Posted by: JeriRose12

Beautiful! I write poetry, too. Really nice. I pray God blesses your wiritng and uses it to bless others. JeriRose



Posted by: babygirl777

Quote:
Originally Posted by MASZOO
Here is a poem that I wrote...

A Love Poem

I look towards the stars and the heavens,
And what do I see?
I see just a little bit of His majesty and power.

I hold a young cat in my arms,
And what do a feel?
I feel little of what His love must be like.

I sit in a forest with no one to bother me,
And what do I hear?
I hear His voice whispering in my ear.

I see someone become well by calling out to Him,
And what do know?
I know that He has healed them by their faith.
that was very beautiful i loved it and it touched me in a good way thank you.
leslie
I see a wooden cross on a hill,
And what do I remember?
I remember that He sent His Son to die for us.

I know of someone who recieved a second chance,
And what do I think?
I think of His gift of salvation and grace that He gave to us.

I hold a new baby in my arms,
And what do I remain?
I remain in His loving arms forever and ever.


So let me know what you all think about it. I would like to hear all kinds of feed back. I would especially like to hear if it touched you and in what way.

Thanks
Jessica M.

Jessica that was a beautiful poem i loved it and it touched me in a special way thank you and God Bless you
leslie